Money brings happiness, but others think too much money can bring problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about money contributes to our lives. However, whether money is a key to happiness has caused heated debate. My view is that a lot of money can bring many problems
First, it is clear that money is essential to our lives but it is not everything. For some people, to earn a lot of money, they will lack of close relationships with family members. This is because they are too exhausted after work and have no time spending with their family. As a result, when they get older, they feel very lonely.
Moreover, money cannot buy health, which is one of the most important aspects of our lives. For example, there are some diseases now having no treatments, like cancer, and no amount of money is able to save one person from such diseases. Therefore, if people focus on earning more money and ignore their health problems, they would be regretted later on because they would be suffering from pain for the rest of their lives.
This is not that to say money only brings drawbacks. Indeed, having some money also allows us to go on extravagant vacations with our loved ones. These vacations give relaxing moments and memories to keep. But unfortunately, this kind of happiness lasts only a short period of time.
All things considered, wealth causes many troubles to our lives due to loneliness and health problems. Meanwhile, we should not overlook the value of money contributing to humans' lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...is kind of happiness lasts only a short period of time. All things considered, wealth cause...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83665338645 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53197203123 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2432814716 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211974578083 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746372052017 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713648172064 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12210452309 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546410651789 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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