possibility of living men in the Venus
Both reading and listening discuss about the possibility of living men in the Venus. The author by mentioning some extreme condition on this planet, states that it is impossible for human being to stay and live there. On the other hand, the professor refutes the reasons and says it will be possible for men to live there if they live in stations in the atmosphere about 50 km above the surface of that planet in light of the following reasons.
First off, the text says the Venus' atmosphere pressure is more than 90 times compare to the Earth atmosphere pressure. On the contrary the lecturer posits the atmosphere pressure in 50 km above the surface of the Venus is about the Earth atmosphere pressure. So the habitants would have no problem about this issue.
Secondly, the writer makes the point that there is no reservoirs of water in the Venus' surface and neither is in its atmosphere. Besides lack of oxygen in its atmosphere is another reason that adversely affect the possibility of carbon-based life on this planet. In contrast, the teacher postulates that there is a lot of CO2 and SO2 in the atmosphere of the Venus that during chemical process could be turned into water and oxygen.
Finally, the text points out about the lack of enough sun light in the surface of the Venus which is required for solar power cells. Conversely, the speaker explains that in 50 km above the surface, there would be two source of sun light. First the sun light that is directly come from the sun that due to lesser cloud in that altitude would be a suitable resource of energy. Besides the sun light that would be reflected from lower level cloud to the stations that would be on the 50 kilometers above the surface, can be seen as another Sun light resource.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no reservoirs'?
Suggestion: there are no reservoirs
...condly, the writer makes the point that there is no reservoirs of water in the Venus surface and neith...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e teacher postulates that there is a lot of CO2 and SO2 in the atmosphere of the ...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'source' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sources'.
Suggestion: sources
...m above the surface, there would be two source of sun light. First the sun light that ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67307692308 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43626852774 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467948717949 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8785182515 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23516748718 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990078116896 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14222875945 0.0662205650399 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15631486666 0.162205337803 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151345140709 0.0443174109184 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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