Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, it has made us more knowledgeable. Discuss both opinions.
In this tech-savvy era, people are using many advanced technical thing in all areas. Some people claim that technology made people lazier while proponents argue that people improving their knowledge by the advance technology. I believe that, people are developing by the advance technology and improving themselves in all aspects by their own. The reasons are development in communication and education system as improved.
Firstly, by the advance technology internet, people are able to contact other which are at far places. People are able to learn a lot of information about the world and outside the world. According the research conducted by Stanford University, many people who are live in developed countries to studies and business connect to the home town very easily by the internet 98% of information is passing through internet.
Secondly, these days as people are changing their life style as the technology is changing. Education system is also changed the teaching methodology into digital class and 3-d class for better visualization to students. According to the survey, more than 80% of schools are changed their education system in digital classrooms, where student can get more information by watching than listening.
In conclusion, although people are becoming lazier with digital technology, there are many benefits with advancements in technology. To this generation and competitive world, people digital technology is very useful for fast growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53744493392 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86603744937 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1791812786 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167916162974 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612996259089 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658353410856 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989097574154 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418421343715 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.