Under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well.
In this era tourism is developed rapidly. Many countries economy is mainly based in the tourism. Low cost airfare made entire tourism industries raise of economies. There are many obvious benefits with tourism. Some people think there are advantages with tourism and others oppose this opinion. In my view it has both pros and cons lets discuss possible explaination.
First and foremost, many developed countries economies thrive heavy on rain-fed agriculture and tourism. Tourism have ample of employment opportunities in hotels, restaurant and entertainment fields without any educational back ground. Moreover, it also helps to poverty reduction by developing the small business and employment to people. So the most developed and under developed countries depends on tourism. For example, country like Kenya, developed by foreign exchange. The country 63% GDP is dominated by tourism. Many people from Germany and UK visit coastal beaches and game reserves in Kenya.
On the flip side, there are disadvantages in tourism. The country culture and tradition might lose. More use of biodegradable products are using like plastic which is environmental hazard. There is chance for attraction of the western culture and forgets their culture.
To conclude, there are ample of advantages in the tourism to under developed countries to expand the culture worldwide with proper analysis. People can control using of plastic with proper rules from the government
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... era tourism is developed rapidly. Many countries economy is mainly based in the tourism....
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...in-fed agriculture and tourism. Tourism have ample of employment opportunities in ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78067309426 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3769217568 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5789473684 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7894736842 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221698806491 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749735095719 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709583914946 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128538239259 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417143998377 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.39 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.08 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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