Doctors, teachers and nurses make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many scientists aver that medical experts and academic mentors play a pivotal role in the development of the nation and are underpaid. I believe that these people are the fundamental pillars of our society and should be paid handsome amount as recognition of their work and to motivate them.
Firstly, I think to become a teacher, doctor or a nurse, one have to study a lot and after manifold years of struggle, one can succeed. Currently, there is shortage of these professionals in our country because of the tough academic curriculum, less salary package and hectic working hours. The aspirants do not have any monetary benefit associated with such jobs and they prefer to choose the easy path of acting or sports. Further, in our country, particularly sports can draw you lot of fame and money in short span of time and can assure you a decent job being offered by state or central government.
Secondly, I believe as the society has now become materialistic so the dignity and respect associated with these professions has been lost as compared to older time now. People are impatient and create ruckus in case any issue observed during operation, general care or studies. For instance, its a regular topic on news that number of doctors are less as compared to number of patients so doctors and nurses have to do overtime and they did not get paid and hospital expect that it is their moral duty to take care of their patients.
Hence I strongly agree that medical professionals and teachers should be paid more and these persons should be highlighted for their excellent work in their respective fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... general care or studies. For instance, its a regular topic on news that number of ...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...on news that number of doctors are less as compared to number of patients so docto...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uty to take care of their patients. Hence I strongly agree that medical professio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89130434783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63728297679 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0494415202 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174465331497 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581734620626 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662095249911 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111056074538 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615214165109 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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