First year

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
I am Vinh ,I am a first year student of Ho Chi Minh...
^^
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o Chi Minh City University of Technology , I think a lot of time about how I do wh...
^^
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...t how I do when I am in this university.I think I will make friendship, playing s...
^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , game
...k I will make friendship, playing soccer,game with them; having a girlfriend….What fu...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...er,game with them; having a girlfriend….What fun it is!. But, when I leave my family...
^^^^
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...n I leave my family, I miss them so much,I miss my former friend too. Oh my god, ...
^^
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly, I miss them so much,I miss my former friend too. Oh my god, I just wanna go h...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 298.0 965.302439024 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 74.0 196.424390244 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02702702703 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.93297208767 3.73543355544 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97085098171 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 106.607317073 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.77027027027 0.547539520022 141% => OK
syllable_count: 93.6 283.868780488 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.9939611545 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114660637638 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517469162911 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731811908298 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114660637638 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.39 11.4140731707 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.