Popular event like football WorldCup and others international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotion in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Enormously popular sport occasions have been operated for years like World Cup, Olympic, … Many people believe that international sport competition will solves the conflict between countries in an unharmful way. In my point of view, I totally agree with this opinion and in this essay, I will express the ideas of mine.
Firstly, connecting relationship between global citizens is a positive that can’t be unseen. For example, although the political relation of North Korean and South Korean have been in an alert for many decades, but by sport occasion like Asiad or Olympic, athletes of two countries still compete with all effort and sport spirit. Not only athletes are only one that leaving behind all politic status, but also the people of two countries, with the spirit and the love for the national team, have a chance to connect to each other, making the world closer and closer.
Secondly, the government in all countries can transfer the political conflict into the rival between their national sport team. For instance, every country would make the best for their athletes to get a gold medal in Olympic, proving the human in their nation that they have strength, agility, endurance in both mind and physic. Therefore, this will defines the position of their country not only in economy, military but also in sport. This is the way that bring the international tension to a lower level and safer than using army and weapon.
In concluding, I strongly confirm the idea that international sporting events are vital on pulling the political tension and emotions down without the use of violent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: solve
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unharmful way" with adverb for "unharmful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'define'
Suggestion: define
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04868913858 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50610219089 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3710400857 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152361417177 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065123913261 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662309550479 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112463314029 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529138886999 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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