today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
to what extend do you agree or disagree?
Better or worse, consumer goods are significantly influenced by advertisement. Although we decide what to buy and consume, it cannot be denied that advertising plays a critical role in our consumerism.
Firstly, advertising is one of the most powerful industry whereby many brands and products are introduced to the society. Secondly we are surrounded with different types of advertisements which cannot avoid observing such as TV commercials, billboards on freeways and etc. For example, while driving on freeway, there are so many ads that attract us and ignoring them is inevitable. Finally, advertising policy is mostly based on society’s demands. They oriented society’s requirements in a way that is more beneficial to them.
The role advertising plays in our life is hard to ignore. However many people fail to admit how much money they pay for their expenses are influenced by advertising. We can see youngsters are usually tempted to buy the newest technology which has been released. For instance, as a new Iphone has been exhibited, they are enthusiastic to buy it, while the old one is working properly. It seems to be like a flow that everyone wants to be a part of it. Furthermore, some try to deceive consumers with glamorous, flamboyant ads to attract them in a stiff competition between brands who produce the same products. As a result of these kinds of advertisement, consumers convince to buy that product with no urgent need of it. Apart from that, people’s lifestyle has undergone many changes in the last decade. It leads to changes in the meaning of some fundamental issues such as beauty. Nowadays beauty factors are considerably defined by mass media and people are compelled to follow the instruction they provide to reach the acceptable beauty by buying staffs such as cosmetics, clothes and so on. That is the power of advertisement which will lead to the high sale of some specific products.
To conclusion, my view is that we should be more aware of advertisement’s impact on our lifestyle to avoid wasting our money. It could benefit us if we underlie our consumer goods based on our demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... TV commercials, billboards on freeways and etc. For example, while driving on freeway, ...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ng plays in our life is hard to ignore. However many people fail to admit how much mone...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...ds of advertisement, consumers convince to buy that product with no urgent need of it....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07344632768 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13224741329 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573446327684 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2089767875 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159502938856 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486774621471 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462026179151 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093982342294 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242008100486 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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