Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowadays, it is undeniable that commercializing tends to play a crucial role in the over-consumerism of unnecessary merchandises in the community. however, this is not the only reason for the phenomenon, individuals' financial status and online shopping are main contributors as well.
Firstly, advertising with its various types starting with television commercials, internet pop-ups and even street billboards undoubtedly have a significant effect on one's subconscious. To exemplify the state, imagine that a company has launched a huge advertising campaign using the diverse means of advertising to one of its newly released products. Once the consumers see this advertised gadget in the markets they probably tend to buy it even if it is unnecessarily needed.
Secondly, most of the individuals, especially in developed countries, have high standards of living which derive them to go shopping to counteract their unpleasant temper which is called '' Retail Therapy''. A scientific study conducted by researchers of marketing in Melbourne university indicates that '' Retail Therapy'' has become a tendency among teens so they started to incorporate the state of happiness and convenience with the product being promoted which consequently have a considerably positive effect on the sales rate.
Lastly, online shopping made the whole process easy, that is just a few clicks on the items you want, and they will be delivered to home without incurring the discomfort of traffic to reach the shops.
To conclude, in my opinion, advertising should not be accused solely for the state of buying unimportant goods among the community's individuals. the financial and the emotional state surely have a significant effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64122137405 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21345939914 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9095382275 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107596612203 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388438818993 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245520111878 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051742324671 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141276418511 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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