In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people skin outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
It is incontrovertible fact that the fairness products became an essential part of people life because people use it regularly. The market trend is rapidly burgeoning because of excessive or major discrimination being experience by the people. However, it affects the health adversely as well as it has some negative impact on the society.
To embark with there are plethora of reasons why the people are use these type of products. The first and foremost is nowadays myriad advertisement represent on the television and mobile phones which related to the beauty products. As well as, these add shows by the celebrities, people want to become like their role models so, they influence to use these products. Moreover, in these modern era, people do not like dull colour people, and they face the many critical problems because of their colour. To epitomize, the people reject for the marriages and these people do not get the jobs because of the personality. Also, the students are tolerated the many situation like the bullying through the other students. So, people like to use these products.
On the other hand, it affects the health of the person. Many creams made with the harmful chemicals which do not suit everyone skin. Also, it damages the natural skin and people look older in the young age because of the wrinkled. Some people suffered with the skin allegories like the redness and pimples.
To continue with my view points, the society effected by it in some ways. Majority of people some a large amount of money of these such beauty products. But, it is only extravagance which effect the budget of the people. And, it not makes the people skin fair, it has only bad effect on the skin.
In conclusion, beauty products has interval part of some people life and people use it day to day life. Because of some social evils and it effect the people life positively despite few drawbacks on the health and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
...fe. Because of some social evils and it effect the people life positively despite few ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52610975349 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487878787879 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4096698265 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25277495786 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774061793512 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387389385761 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142732373175 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016726986839 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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