Respond to the instructions below and support your position with relevant reasoning drawn from your academic studies, reading, observation, and/or experience.
The issue is whether or not the real talent of a famous musician cannot exactly be assessed until the musician has been dead for
several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with kind assessment. I defy this statement because people are famous before their rip.
Firstly, For a real talent their is no age. This means anyone can famous in their particular field. For Musician also their is no age for became a celebrity. In this modern era, there is manifold singer in various singe field: Hip hop, pop, and so on. Some Musician are famous at young age. For instance, Justin biber is world famous singer in this era, and he tyro at the age of 17, so their time period for show your prowess.
Secondly, Famous Musician is remember for several generations. Because of their real talent. They Play music and their song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song. This Mean person is break-up in relationship and he is listening break-up love song, or he is in love then he hearing a love Music. Peeps are also listening music because some have hobby, or pastime.
Meanwhile, Some People are famous by their dead. for example, Micheal Jackson(MJ) is a well know and famous person in musician of 19th century. MJ is first hip-hop dancer and musician, and now he is become a history of a musician every dancer follow his path.
On the whole, The original statement is veracity. The real talent of people are famous by how they show to the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk have to perform various time in the front of whole.
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- ISSUE TOPIC: The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 50
- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue is whether or not the real talent of a famous musician ca...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her ...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this statement because people are famous before their rip. Firstly, For a real...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...heir rip. Firstly, For a real talent their is no age. This means anyone can famous...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...eir particular field. For Musician also their is no age for became a celebrity. In th...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... Hip hop, pop, and so on. Some Musician are famous at young age. For instance, Just...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at young age. For instance, Justin biber is world famous singer in this era, and ...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remembered'.
Suggestion: remembered
...rowess. Secondly, Famous Musician is remember for several generations. Because of the...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an is remember for several generations. Because of their real talent. They Play music a...
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Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Folk
...nd their song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in ...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'heard'.
Suggestion: heard
...song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...hed to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song. This Mean person...
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Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d he is listening break-up love song, or he is in love then he hearing a love Mus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., Some People are famous by their dead. for example, Micheal JacksonMJ is a well kn...
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Line 10, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re famous by how they show to the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk h...
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Line 10, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk have to perform various time in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57839721254 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27983756298 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491289198606 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1268767708 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0142510331898 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00365251107564 0.084324248473 4% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0118284431606 0.0667982634062 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0079671542261 0.151304729494 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113780440643 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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