It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
We live in a changing world where every single day is unique. While we have to admit that there are occasions remaining unchanged might be excellent choices, generally speaking, I strongly agrees with that the advantage of change outweigh the disadvantages.
Many argue that there are plenty of disadvantages to make changes. The authority in this country has been tearing down the old building and ruining the culture heritage in many cities. Innovations such as E-businness caused tremendous inconvenience to the mid-aged and elder people. Those so called improvements mentioned above not only segregated the past memories and the present days, but also enlarged the gaps between generations. Therefore, many of the old-fashioned would like to remain the same.
However, other than the drawbacks mentioned above, I insist that there are more advantages of adapting to this changing world than disadvantages. Although each of us should cherish and honor the traditions from which we were raised, Refreshing our mind to keep up with the emerging of different new concepts and innovations is a must to lead us forward in the stream of human history. Amazon tribes, for example, became far more civilized than their ancestors after they opted to step out of the comfort zone and embrace the 21-st century civilization. To the contrary, being rigid and resist the trend of history might lead to self-destruction.
In conclusion, Keeping ourselves with the unstoppable progress of the society is the best option for all individuals and in doing that, we will also remain competent in every race of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...choices, generally speaking, I strongly agrees with that the advantage of change outwe...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'memories'.
Suggestion: memories
...mentioned above not only segregated the past memories and the present days, but also enlarged...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...erent new concepts and innovations is a must to lead us forward in the stream of human ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92522694969 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.382696355 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17485425809 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554323975605 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637029503839 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929081244774 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539481339168 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.