Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Stress is increasingly being found as a cause of many illnesses nowadays. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress related diseases like heavy workload and not having enough time to deal with family problems. This essay will also propose solutions to these problems such a decreasing the the amount of work and employees taking enough time off work to work on their personal issues.
People are working harder and harder nowadays than ever before. And as a result, they have almost no time to face their daily personal issues. People place themselves under extremely harmful environment compete with others. For example, people work overtime not because they have to but to win the favour of their higher ups for a possible promotion in the future. This leads to mental, physical and emotional hardships because they work longer hours and have almost no time to deal with their private troubles.
Keeping the workload to one's own capacity and taking a break from work once in a while are essential to prevent stress related disorders. The public need to understand that, if they continue this behaviour it would eventually lead to mental and physical distress. So, in order to reduce work related stress, one must do a fair amount of work and skip work once from time to time.
In conclusion, in today's modern world stress has been seen as major cause of many medical issues. This essay showed how stress is caused by working overtime and neglecting individual's problem, This text also suggested the way we can overcome this matter i.e by working a fair ratio of work and by taking a leave off work once in a while.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ons to these problems such a decreasing the the amount of work and employees taking eno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35886300871 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4760547878 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137713515048 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556249824672 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557947046953 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980659972384 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568495434393 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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