These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits outweigh disadvantages.
Nowadays settlement in foreign countries is the key to explore the life. However, one of the most controversial issue today relates to Are there more benefits; of working abroad and settle over there rather than demerits? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
The first step to understand why it is happening? To embark on, one of the prominent reason is they want to improve their living standard. Similarly, due to this it will help them in their future life. Moreover, people can earn more money which help them to fulfill their basic needs. Likewise, they easily improve their children education because in foreign countries they are better education facilities. A best epitome of this a survey conducted by Hindustan Times in which they reveal that foreign countries play a vital role in one's induvidual life. Meanwhile, people easily gain success in their life which may help them to pursue their career level.
However, it is truly said, no rose without Thrones. Broadly speaking, there are also some demerits of working abroad. The forest reason is that people have no knowledge about foreign culture. Although, people have knowledge about their native country but they also faced some difficulties in foreign countries such as: communication, discipline, rules and regulation. moreover, Taxes are usually high in foreign countries. Furthermore, if Government of India take initiative steps to improve the education facilties and give job opportunities to the people this problem could be solved.
As we have seen, there are number of answer to this question, on balancing, however, I tend to believe that if person want to go abroad they only focus on their study rather than work, this will help them to pursue their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, broadly speaking, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08843537415 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63714921308 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3326434831 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218840702899 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718174106339 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553568492731 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130409253282 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473848002639 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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