In recent years proportion of crime committed by youngsters is on the rise family are solely responsible for this trend. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.
The percentage of crime committed by youngsters is on upward trend in the recent years. There are many factors which are responsible for this unfortunate phenomenon, however, in my point of view the responsibility of the family is primary and it is the environment in the family that shapes the behaviour of kids.
Firstly, most of the parents now days are very busy in their daily activities, job or business and so they have less free time for their offsprings. Kids are left under the care of somebody else or in care centre. When parents do not interact with their kids, they feel lonely, isolated and that leads to frustrations and aggressions. Which, furthermore, could lead to drug addiction, smoking, drinking, stealing or other misconduct as a way to be free from frustrations or aggressions. Thus, it is really essential for the family to give time to kids, listen, interact and help them solving confusions they are facing.
Secondly, other causes such as socialisation, bulling and online games are also working as triggering factor for the children to follow wrong path. Whatever is the cause, it is solely family responsibility to watch out their children’s daily activities, as well as their behaviour. For example: reasons of dissatisfactions, types of friends they have, their activities and performance at school and out of school etc. are the main areas should be monitored regularly. If any suspicious activities are found, immediate correct actions should be taken. Interaction, counselling and motivating ect are the initial steps and sometimes professional treatment may also be needed if the matter is more serious.
In conclusion, although, there are many causes which encourage the children to choose the misconduct path, the parents and family have the primary role to look after their children. Family’s supervision and monitoring is the key fact to lead a child to right path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...to kids, listen, interact and help them solving confusions they are facing. Secondl...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and monitoring is the key fact to lead a child to right path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20967741935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04585318821 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.734475892 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163057017373 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532098252425 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716499277751 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113821524029 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10450038979 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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