Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
After industrial revolution, internet and technological breakthroughs are considered the fourth revolution because they considerably improve human life in a way that was not expected. Technology enables human-beings to live in a better world in a social way, in the health sector and expand limits of exploration.
First, technology as smartphone correlated to internet in every place in the world enables human-beings to have some news from everywhere around the world and to communicate with everyone. For example, my sister went in Vietnam with a non-governmental organization for 3 months, technology make it possible to communicate with her and reassure us about her health and safety. Without technology, it would not have been possible to have some regular news from her and we would have felt more worried.
Secondly, beyond social interactions, technology has increased progress in health. Scanners, IRMs, nano technology enable doctors and surgeons to be more accurate on diagnoses. Consequently, they are also more efficient in curating difficult diseases. Technology allows people to live longer and better. For example, a lot of people who lost their legs in accidents are now able to walk again thanks to a fake mechanical leg. Some of them are even going to Paralympics game.
Finally, technology has improved our knowledge on our past and on our possible future in the solar system. Nasa was able to send satellites and rockets around the earth and on Mars in order to find other form of life and to understand how the solar system works and was created. Knowing our origin and our possible future reassure people. Without going in space, technology has increased quality of life because a lot of people love travelling, and they can go everywhere thanks to trains and airplanes. Discovering new cultures and new countries helps people to be more open-minded and participates in their well-being.
To conclude, technology has built a better social world and healthier one and enables people to improve their knowledge of the world surrounding them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a social way" with adverb for "social"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... human-beings to live in a better world in a social way, in the health sector and expand limits...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and we would have felt more worried. Secondly, beyond social interactions, te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28096676737 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99849208946 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531722054381 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4270831352 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130223821013 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460858364483 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557500625054 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832025567103 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342459181235 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.