what problems will your country face in next 10 years? how can we problems be overcome?
It is our present mistakes and carelessness that become serious issues in future. There are couple problems that our country can face in the future. In this essay, I will explore the same, and will suggest some measures to overpower those problems.
First and foremost issue that may arise is, unemployment. As it is evident from the recent survey conducted by Government of India that, the population is increased by 3 times in present date.The growing population is related to lack of opportunities for individuals to earn their bread. This will also affect the economy of the country. As the famous proverbs says, knowledge is best weapon to fight, we need to spread awareness among people to encourage them to emphasize on organised family planning. Also, we need to develop more job opportunities to avoid unemployment.
Secondly, the greater threat which can be clearly seen at present stage is to our ecological balance. The reckless cutting of trees to fulfill the demand of population is major issue. A number of forests are being destroyed by indrustrialists for their own selfish motive, this leads to the disturbance natural food web of animals.The recent article was published in "Hindustan Times" focused on ecological hazards and their figurers were surprising, that more than 2000 species of animals and plants become extinct. About 2100 new endangered species were included in Red book last year.Hence, need to reduce pollution and encourage afforestation, that is, planting more trees to preserve natural habitat of animals.
To sum up, it is often said that, "prevention is better than cure", hence we need to put efforts today to not let the hazards to arise, which can affect our future. In case if any problem arises, it is the responsibility of both Government and the citizens to come together to fight against the issues. Neither the government nor the citizens can individually solve any problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19682539683 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96544302858 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3077688781 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163309517011 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587797201086 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759804616478 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100926200034 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574021489844 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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