Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
There is a debate about children’s education, some believe that it is best to home-school, while others believe that receiving education in a traditional way at the school is more effective for a child’s development. Both points of view are valid, and in this essay I will discuss both opinions and conclude with my own.
Teaching at home can be very effective for a child’s development. Every child is unique and requires a personalized approach to get the most out of education. Homeschooling programs can be customized and allow a child to learn at their own pace. Moreover, this method is great way to deliver education for children in remote areas and places where schools are not available. For instance, the mainstream of computers and the Internet makes teaching at home very accessible. Therefore, flexibility of homeschooling can be very beneficial for some pupils.
On the other hand, many studies concluded on importance of social interactions for development of a child. Many scientists believe that emotional intelligence play far more important role in one’s success, which can be developed by constant interaction with other people. Such environment can only be arranged in schools; a home-schooled child will have limited social circle as he or she will mainly engage with family members and maybe some neighbors. In addition, pupils learn better in group settings. Classroom discussions, presentations and knowledge sharing are vital in developing skills like critical thinking, analysis and problem solving. Settings that traditional schooling provide are unique and cannot be replaced easily and, in general, suit most of children.
Given the aforementioned reasons the advantages of teaching at school outweigh the advantages of homeschooling. In my opinion, traditional teaching methods are more suitable in the majority of cases, however, there are some cases where a child requires homeschooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...others believe that receiving education in a traditional way at the school is more effective for a c...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...me neighbors. In addition, pupils learn better in group settings. Classroom discussion...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...hbors. In addition, pupils learn better in group settings. Classroom discussions, ...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...e replaced easily and, in general, suit most of children. Given the aforementioned reasons the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50836120401 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20464171578 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1048112455 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437532450093 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128133533473 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924077181215 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267530641493 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941745486616 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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