Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Since the modernization of societies, the recreational activities have become an unavoidable part of humans' life. Some persons hold the opinion that in this day and age, people spend a considerable amount of time on their leisure activities. On the other hand, the people have an opposite view. According to my point of view, people spend more time on recreational activities than any generation before. I have some reasons for my contention, three of which are listed below.
First of all, people are more involved in laborious jobs and they need more time to spend on their leisure activities. To put it another way, today's jobs that are consist of a lot of responsibilities is weary and people need more spare time to get relaxed. For example, many companies offer their employees many travels and the employees should go to a sabbatical in order to reclaim the desired energy for a good performance.
To continue, I am of the opinion that due to the improvement of technology, people, nowadays, can easily do thig they like to do. In other words, technological-based tools provide an opportunity to easily conquer the impediments of doing a recreational activity. For the purpose of illustration, in the past, many people were afraid of going to travels due to its burdens so that they should use a sluggish automobile with a low immune level that may entangle them into dangerous situations. On the other hand, today's people can easily use their state-of-art cars and enjoy traveling. Therefore, I believe that the people, now, have a higher tendency to do their favorites because of the ease that the technology offers.
Third, at the present time, I believe that the people view the life differently from the people of the past. In the past, people were concerned about contriving to buy a commodity and their necessities. On the contrary side, nowadays, People's concerns are revolved around their leisure time. It is a consequence of higher wages that is provided in jobs these days. Simply put, people enjoy a higher wage and they can spend it on their recreational activities without any concern.
The aforementioned reasons point to the conclusion that the people, now, spend too much time on personal enjoyment due to the improvement of technology, higher levels of their job's hardship as well as their higher wages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...ut it another way, todays jobs that are consist of a lot of responsibilities is weary a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, third, well, for example, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01282051282 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93188618597 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1650141679 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.894736842 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220224517343 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668123498948 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577355034125 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114969951059 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620001242805 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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