The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amount of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Ancient buildings need regular maintenance. As renovation of these historical buildings drain away large part of the government budget, therefore, some people hold the opinion that this money would be better invested on construction of new buildings and roads. However, I strongly disagree with latter notion and in this essay I will support my viewpoint with examples.
Historical buildings are source of tourism. Almost every country has ancient monuments which attract thousands of tourists all over the world. maintenance of these buildings by government bodies not only make the country proud about its ancient property but also source of income for government. One such instance is Taj Mahal located in India. Taj Mahal is one of the 7 wonders of the world and its exquisite beauty attracts lots of visitors around the world every year. It has been mentioned in one survey that 20% of state's revenue is being generated by this wonder because of the patronage of the tourists.
Moreover, ancient buildings proved to be an excellent source of education for students as well as researchers. An excursion to such ancient buildings provide better assistance to students and create a vivid picture about history and architecture associated with these monuments. History and Architectural study are such areas which make use of these ancient structures as a teaching tool. I vividly remember an educational trip to Amritsar's Jalianwala Bagh during my school time. By looking at the many decades old marks of bullets on walls, we learnt about the sacrifices made by our patriots in past.
To recapitulate, the expenditure to preserve ancient buildings for tourism and educational assistance is worthy not only for one nation but also conserve land and trees to prevent global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Maintenance
...ousands of tourists all over the world. maintenance of these buildings by government bodies...
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Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...out the sacrifices made by our patriots in past. To recapitulate, the expenditure to...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd and trees to prevent global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26573426573 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79840009341 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7643335019 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142926719521 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443615666383 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450638422833 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836194090238 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594289938039 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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