In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable fact that humankind are earning remuneration whoever currently in high position in this society depend on their knowledge. However, there are some counter arguments that government responsibilities to restrict the hike to avoid inflation. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
On the other hand, salaries always based on the quality such as how to express our self, more analytical skill and ability to grasp any sectors and they can expect more salaries from the government. Moreover, in each country generally highlight their salary review for each industries and this one will indicate whether this country developed or not. If government fail to pay more salary then they definitely loose their important resources and they look for a better job in better country. In this scenario, country authority has to take initiation to hold all the scientists, doctors and familiar icons on their respective industries. For instance, in India, there are 14% people who left the job and joined in various countries and who are all high level industrialists.
On the one hand, humankind has to work for their countries everyone has lot of expectation from country administration at the same time we have to work for country and has to be part of country development. Government can able to fix some amount and they can go beyond apart from that level to avoid money inflation so our responsibilities to understand the concerns and we need to proceed accordingly. More over, other countries always try to fleece your ideas and energy after that they will through us and we will not get that recognition. However, recognition will get in our country only.
To sum up this, government responsibilities to hold the genius people from several industries whoever has more skills so that country will get lot of beneficial and it will grow faster than other countries. However, our responsibilities to stay back in mother country and always we need to be part of our country growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
.... If government fail to pay more salary then they definitely loose their important r...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...to pay more salary then they definitely loose their important resources and they look...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'cans'.
Suggestion: cans
...part of country development. Government can able to fix some amount and they can go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04424778761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92026459146 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8630172892 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16635500505 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590934092311 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363351982204 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106573829676 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290758448398 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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