weather or not Venus is a feasible place for a permanent human presence
The reading and the lecture have contradictory opinions about weather or not Venus is a feasible place for a permanent human presence. The author strongly says that Venus is not like a place to such a goal because of its inhospitable condition and provides three reasons for this claim. On the other hand, the lecture adamantly delineates that to meet such an objective is challenging but possible. The speaker asserts that there are some ways to solve the mentioning problems of Venus to have permanent life for humans like having floating stations on Venus atmosphere instead of on its surface.
First and foremost, according to the author of the extract, the high pressure at Venus surface, nearly 90 times greater than the pressures at earth surface, crush everything, so accordingly it is one of the problems of living in Venus surface. Nevertheless, the speaker offset such a seeing issue, since in her opinion by having a station above the surface of Venuss, roughly 50 Km, the pressure can be as equal as of the earth surface without any damage.
The professor in the lecture further mention that human beings can chemically produce water and oxygen from the components of Venus atmosphere like CO2 and sulfuric acid. This declaration refutes the writer implication of how human can have water and oxygen on the Venus, while there are hardly any oxygen or water vapor in Venus's atmosphere.
The text lasting insists that insufficient sunlight that reach Venus's surface bring humans trouble in different aspects of their activities like powering machines. Nonetheless, the professor in the lecture counters this by declaring that such a problem will be disappeared by above noting solution, stationary above the surface of the Venus. He expresses that in above of Venus's surface, not only cloud is not thick at all, so the stationary in those areas can absorb sunlight, but also it brings human station a possibility to absorb the reflected sunlight from the surface of Venus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05167173252 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67764076613 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525835866261 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.6013189529 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9090909091 21.698381199 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267279259109 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114399107922 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139171237561 0.0662205650399 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154452779468 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137370932424 0.0443174109184 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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