You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the offer letter issued to me on 25th April for the position of Software Engineer. As per the appointment notice, I am expected to commence the new job on 25th May. I wanted to inform you that I would not be able to join your organizations as I have decided to continue with my current employer.
Let me explain the reason for my non-availability in detail. As discussed during the technical and HR interview, my prime rationale for joining your organization was the lucrative and challenging role I was offered in your company. Later, on a talk with my current manager, I am proposed to lead a similar role in my present job along with an attractive remuneration, perks and additional medical and travel benefits, making me grab this opportunity for an auspicious career. I sincerely apologize for my non-availability and is grateful for recognizing my talent. I find it hard to say goodbye to my company who had been with me through thick and thins, and today also recognized my need and offered me a new designation.
I hope to work with you in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Tom Robin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the offer letter issued to me on 25th A...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed and offered me a new designation. I hope to work with you in the future. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73631840796 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03865674534 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3426396671 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162335336172 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726370055283 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498377395891 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131915234282 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369989532176 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.