Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Nowadays, having pets at home is a modern trend. There are various reasons why to have pets in your house. Normally, people use to have pets because they need to get rid of depression or they need to kill the boredom. Therefore, they have pets in their house so that they do not have a feeling of loneliness. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that those who do not take proper care of pets should not be allowed to keep them. In this essay, I shall provide my point of view.
Firstly, if a person cannot take good care of the domestic animal then he should avoid keeping them at his place. However, pets cannot express their feeling by talking or showing anger. Nevertheless, as a human being, we need to understand their feeling and should watch them out. As a human being, it should be our morale duty to take of pet's need like proper food, time to play with them and timely cleaning.
On the other hand, most of the times pets are bought for killing boredom and not with the intention of taking proper care. For example, if a person buys parrots it is just for his entertainment he might not pay attention to his food requirement. This has led to the pets becoming lonely when compared to their counterparts in the outside world.
In a nutshell, if people want to keep pets in their homes then they should pay attention to their needs. Otherwise, they must not be allowed to have pets at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47126436782 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30398532549 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2083701854 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434418950015 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143694574589 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916214338174 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26128390918 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693411680221 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 11.5310837438 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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