Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Nowadays, by spreading the identical products among the people throughout the world, a striking resemblance has been created among the countries. Although this changing track may have some weakness, I think it is more advantageous.
The attitude of people with different nationality, has been altered recently and the same prospective has been propagated among them. Take as an illustration, contemporary people from diverse countries, are willing to get dressed the same style according to mode. In addition, why hardly do mode designers consider the cultural factors, the variety of cultures has been dwindled steadily. In other words, by decreasing in applying of ethnical clothes, this industry will be ruined and forgot as soon as possible.
On the other hand, resembled countries make a condition to a better world. I suppose, racism will decrease by spreading the same product among people, why by this way, for example people will not be annoyed because of their local clothes. In addition, ever people are becoming similar, they will be near to each other more and more, why, I think all thing have made people apart from each, is their appearance. For instance this matter has been approved, and it has been more than 10 years that, pupils are forced to wear the same clothes in Iran.
On conclusion, I believe that, contemporary people are able to buy the same things anywhere, although this event could cause some problem for culture of countries, make a condition which people from different region become closer to each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt region become closer to each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, apart from, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67210565885 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0935940859 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285032981909 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991470144595 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05437685482 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170114646449 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685175230527 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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