A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Students in a nation needs a good formal education and hence it is the duty of a nation to provide so.As per the curriculum requirements,there is a need of universal currriculum as there are different types of boards in a country,for e.g, In India there for every state is a state board and two more boards that are centralised.They need to follow the same curriculum as to make the students stand at the same level.
There will be a drastic issue that is to be mentioned if the nation does not help out the national curriculum ,because then some will have different knowledge and some will have other.It will then be difficult for the colleges to get admits and the whole process will be painstaking.For Example,If a university sets an entrance exam for admits,they have to set different exams for people coming from different boards,as some didn't get knowledge of what others do.There needs an implementation of national curriculum for that,in order to make a universal exam for all the students and it can then also be called fair evaluation beacause they are testing all students at the same ground,unlike before.
Nation should also be aware of what to be taught in schools,as the formal education is the base of any student for getting par in the real world because in the end the idea of yours i.e.how you look towards society?,how you behave to a staunching situation?,how you find solutions if you are stick in any situation that is extreme?.While shaping the national curriculum , they should keep in mind that what is going to be helpful for them,not to oppress them with loads of work, because then they will not be able to focus on things that really matters.For Example,In india many schools give their students loads of homework to be done ,then they react to that work as pressure and not a window for learning something,if they fail here on this level only.How will they manage in their afterlife when there bases and adaptions of society are not well enough?
There must be a national curriculum for all the students but they should not be forced for following it,if someone wants to study literarture and he knows that he can accomplish a bright future in that ,then what is the point of making him study Science,it will deviate him from the interest in literature as he has to give some time to science too,because if he doesn't he will fail the examinations and will remain in the same standard,here where the pressure arrives and he was extrapolated to leave the interest that he is having.
Nation should have national curriculum to make all students stand at the same ground but beside it,it should also help students to shape their interest in the fields they want to be.They should not apply any pressure of loads of work or any thing that pressurizes them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78272153918 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45867768595 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 96.0 23.0359550562 417% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.659526758 60.3974514979 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.0 118.986275619 388% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 96.8 23.4991977007 412% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.4 5.21951772744 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305887363315 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21648557264 0.0831039109588 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882690468495 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21648557264 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882690468495 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.4 14.1392134831 349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.5 48.8420337079 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 12.1743820225 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.57 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.4 11.2143820225 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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