Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion
These day, as urbanization process, the number of people who have city lives is increasing. Although, many people love living in urban area, others prefer settling down in countryside. Personally, I enjoy having a simple life in vertical city as opposed to horizontal one.
On the one hand, living in a big city is very convenient and interesting due to several reasons. Firstly, a domination of complex facilities should be taken into account. Because of their convenience, people can save their time and expenses more. For instance, citizens can shop and entertain in the same building instead of having to travel far between two places. Secondly, by making the most of skyscrapers, the land area for road and public facilities is widened more. As a consequence, traffic congestions rarely occur and the nature space is maintained. Moreover, vertical cities usually are headquarters of big companies or financial centers. Thus, urban residents have greater chance to have well-paid jobs.
On the other hand, several people who are friend of quiet and peace, choose a certain horizontal city for themselves to enjoy their lives. The most advantage of this choice is that people can get on with nature at the same time escape from hustles and bustles. Because the small population lives in a large area, most of houses have a garden or lawn where they can plant flower and enjoy their hobbies. Furthermore, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground and it won’t take much time to leave.
In conclusion, while living in a vertical city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a city with tranquility makes living in a horizontal city the better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day, as urbanization process, the number of...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the skyscrapers') or simply say ''most skyscrapers''.
Suggestion: most of the skyscrapers; most skyscrapers
...een two places. Secondly, by making the most of skyscrapers, the land area for road and public faci...
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Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...s maintained. Moreover, vertical cities usually are headquarters of big companies or financ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...bs. On the other hand, several people who are friend of quiet and peace, choose a cer...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the houses') or simply say ''most houses''.
Suggestion: most of the houses; most houses
...small population lives in a large area, most of houses have a garden or lawn where they can pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97133757962 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70149495143 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3365658911 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8235294118 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17850501969 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580458904136 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641677982873 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136958521585 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611750232797 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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