Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain the problem it is causing you
Offer at least one solution
Dear James,
How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing to raise my concern about your listening loud music until late at night. It does not let my family and me sleep in the night. I understand you are a musician and play guitar in the band. Music is bread and butter for you but please try to understand my situation.
Firstly, as you know I am heart patient and doctor has advised me full bed rest. I feel uncomfortable by the noise around me. Secondly, my kid needs to go to school early morning, so it disturbed him a lot.
I suggest you to please play the music in low volume or listen music in the soundproof area. I hope you understand my request otherwise, I have to complain to the leasing office. I am waiting for your reply at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Kanwal Kohli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding noise'?
Suggestion: the surrounding noise
... full bed rest. I feel uncomfortable by the noise around me. Secondly, my kid needs to go to school...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope you understand my request otherwise, I have to complain to the leasing office...
^^
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have to complain to the leasing office. I am waiting for your reply at the earlie...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31818181818 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44432869919 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0572144674 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.1538461538 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8461538462 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254473323767 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896493671196 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835000602107 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160081947412 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106087346619 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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