Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain the problem it is causing you
Offer at least one solution
Dear Saad,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to complain about the loud music coming from your apartment at night which causes a lot of disturbance. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I work with a company with a UK time zone thus I only find a few hours to sleep at night hence the loud music coming from your flat has made my life miserable. The lack of sleep is not only affecting my health but also making my life wretched at work. Additionally, loud music disturbs me while I am working from home due to which I recently made mistakes while preparing a report. Although my intent is not to stop you from listening to music.
Lastly, my humble request to you is to listen to soft music so that other people are not disturbed. Additionally, if you still need to have a craving to listen to loud music you can use headphones so that other people are not disturbed in sleep at night.
I look forward to your response and hope you will consider my suggestion.
Regards
Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Saad, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
^^^
Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...made mistakes while preparing a report. Although my intent is not to stop you from liste...
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Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot to stop you from listening to music. Lastly, my humble request to you is to l...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u will consider my suggestion. Regards Dave
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, look, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43010752688 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46407885178 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2943402497 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277029752605 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995144842361 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753819840331 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172323054886 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380213965372 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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