People living in the 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, in our days we can live a really high-quality life contrasted to people`s life 50 years ago.
Firstly, and the most crucial we live in the piece. Of course, people have arguments but we do not know what does war literally mean.
Secondly, we can communicate with each other more. Make friends with social media is usual for us. Also we always keep in touch.
Thirdly, we have a better quality of medicine and education. We do not die of malaria or small pox anymore. we always can call a doctor and get the high-quality help quickly, which painlessly stop our ailments. Particullary in Kazakhstan primary and secondary schools are free, so every person can get a basic knowledge. The goverments giva a lot of grants ( free education ) for smart and talant people. I truly think that it is amazing.
Finally, we have more rights. womens can work and hold high positions, people with dark skin can liva as usual as other majority. All nations are equal and no one hurts anybody by one or another differences.
If I could dicided when I would born, I definately choose 21st centure.
I hope other people realize how our time is stunning and would love it more. I hope people will not destroy our planet and life at the world would be better and better every year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64473684211 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54066269168 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0776774721 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8333333333 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175155763652 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491555877181 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593364272351 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895049819637 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070648516931 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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