Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether or not to give money as a gift to youngsters is becoming increasing controversial. While many people believe that it is the best gift to give youngsters, others feel just opposite. This essay will discuss why not giving money as present is a good idea but ultimately, giving it as a present has its own benefits.
There is a part of society who do not like to give money as a present to youngsters. This is, because youngsters could misuse this money to buy unnecessary stuff. It often leads to wastage of people’s hard earned money. For example, some youngsters buy sports equipment from the money they receive on their birthday’s which they do not even play. Thus, giving money to a youngster could potentially prove not beneficiary, as the one who gave it thought.
On the contrary, when people present someone with money, they think that it will help them In certain ways. It can be used to help someone financially. This way, youngsters also have the freedom to buy things which they actually need instead of if someone randomly gifts something which they do not even need. For instance, youngster receiving money as a gift, can use it to support their university fees. Therefore, giving money as a present has its own importance.
Giving money as a gift has become a debatable topic. This essay discussed it could prove beneficiary but it also has its own demerits. In my opinion, to give money as present to youngsters is quite good which lead them to have a positive attitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not to give money as a gift to youngsters i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their university fees. Therefore, giving money as a present has its own importanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80076628352 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75104323286 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0504133707 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324657393345 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12456984154 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928128967432 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229447769479 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105327058805 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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