Some people say that it is impossible for a country to br both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether a country has the possibility of achieving economic growth as well as preserving environment">environmental cleanness is debatable. Acknowledging the enigma of turning this into reality, being environment">environmentally and economically successful remains an attainable goal for countries, with specific requirements.
On the first hand, people are holding a hesitant view on the statement about a country's capability of acquiring prosperity, while keeping their environment unpolluted. The reason for this is that most countries place great emphasis on natural resources-based industrial activities. Take Vietnam as a prime example. An excessive amount of fossil fuel has been exploited in recent decades for heavy industries such as thermopower or metallurgy. Consequently, the environment is detrimentally damaged, leading to alarming pollution issues in exchange for economic achievements.
On the other hand, it is still feasible for a country to possess a healthy economy and an ideal living atmosphere. An increasing number of policymakers are now environment">environmental-conscious, guaranteeing the consideration of this factor before decisions are conducted. this does create advantages for governments to clarify their vision of growing the economy, since sustainable development is the silver bullet for realizing the aforementioned goal. For instances, sweden are renowned not only for their balance of economic growth and natural protection, but also their advancement in handling waste. Researches indicated that 99% of waste in sweden are converted into electricity, biogas and fertilizer, generating benefits for the national wealth. These are the result of long-term policy implementation which neither economy nor environment.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that making a country both economically and environment">environmentally flourished is a tough challenge to be dealt with. However, with adequate governmental management, there are still possibilities of achieving both targets simultaneously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... factor before decisions are conducted. this does create advantages for governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5231316726 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.02952869196 2.80592935109 179% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654804270463 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7791467444 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21372736031 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665122093534 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040561057792 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131337978178 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194003349418 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.54 12.4159519038 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.