Read and think about the following statement:
Pets should be treated like family members.
do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Humans are the most intellectually evolved animals on earth. They tend to live in colonies and take care of one another. There is a conception in the society that other animals tend to be selfish to survive. In my opinion it is a misconception, and therefore, pets should be treated as family members.
First, pets are loyal and provide unconditional love to their owner. Animals develop intense affection towards humans as well as other animals that extend their care towards them during their most formative years. Like kids love their parents and look up to them, in the same way pets love their master. People spend ample amount of money on pet care. There is almost 50 percent of the population that adopt pets. In a survey done in the United States of America a family spends almost 30,000 dollars on pets per year. This is almost equivalent to college education of a human child. Therefore, by not treating them like a family member is unfair to them and waste of time and resource.
Another reason is, in nature animals adopt other species as their own. Sometimes, wild animals act as a guardian to the younger ones of the other species. For example, in a wildlife sanctuary when poachers killed the mother of the tiger cub, authorities brought the cub to the nurturing mother of the puppies and she took the cub and nurtured it as her own. Humans are supposed to be more civilised than animals and they should learn from the examples of the wild to treat pets as equals.
Finally, pets act as therapeutic animals for humans. Many who suffer from anxiety disorder and other stress associated medical conditions are advised to have pets for their wellbeing. Pets detect distress easily and provide comfort to the person. Pets act as more reliable and trustworthy emotional support for humans and therefore, they should be treated with similar care and respect as a family member.
Nature teaches us to live in peace and harmony. Humans should treat their pets as family member as they provide them respect and unconditional love the qualities that in present day is lagging in many human families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83746556474 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47225188538 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504132231405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3864794052 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165922729682 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527738306192 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682458878357 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102737283268 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342303155476 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.