In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development.
According to me,I think illegal employers are reject job applicantions because it is detrimental effect human being life. I am fully agree with this statement. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, modern world of world all dwellers are very well education in the citizens.Hence, education play a vital role in their life because it all depart people life.Afterthat, todays person are co- education in their life and society give the respect and support all the work .For instance, today are very touch competition in the career like docter, teacher, police, fashion design, engineer and business etc. Therefore, dwellers are very obligation in their work . They are very punctual in their work places. But, they should give the best proformance in the office.In my view, employmee life is very hard because it they full time spend in their office rather than work and deal
in the international company and foreign company deal.
To trigger with, illegal employers are reject in the campany. Otherwise, all candidate are equal work in their company. Moreover, they should be perform best in their job.Last but not the least, illegal employers are not equal work later to all higher studies education employeers. But, they have a higher standard in the education level and they have very necessary to the work because company have contract to the foreign countries.For instance, Australia, Canada, New zealand and london so on.In my point of point, illegal employer have not well education in their life. They have detrimental effect to all the candidate.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in my opinion, illegal employers could be reject in the campany because today all dwellers have all education in the society. Then, why we should waste seat to give iilegl employers.They have well education and we during the job in any companieslike international and foriegn campanies.They should good message to the todders because they should focus in the study they will achieve any things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20771513353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7688593414 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507418397626 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.496531934 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873958921637 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046144950773 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647440320493 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602383713023 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547848806889 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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