The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie graphs give information about the percentages of water used for households, industry, and agriculture in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.
Overall, residential sector accounts for the vast majority of water usage in the two American regions while Agriculture represents the highest proportion of water used worldwide.
In San Diego County, the percentage of total water usage used for homes is the largest number at 60%, approximately doubling that in California and far more than that in the world. The quantity of water used for industrial purpose follows at 23% which is significantly higher than the figure for the agricultural field.
Likewise, In California, residential water consumption comprises the greatest percentage of 39% of entire water usage. The next-largest proportion in California is the amount of water used for industry, at 33%, 5% more than that for Agriculture in this area.
By contrast, Regarding worldwide, more water is used in the agricultural sector than in other purposes. The agricultural water usage is a massive 69% of global water used whereas only 23% of water used globally goes to industrial activities. The lowest proportion of global water usage in the world is used for homes.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.275 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00904885304 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.092463056 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254861673136 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139350776376 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796488795893 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174028127219 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056642304031 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.