If a city has given the money to investment, which options do you prefer listed in the following
Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, therefore the government has sufficient fund to invest in some specific fields. Some citizens contend that the money ought to be distributed to erect a public garden to enhance residents’ environment, while others suggest that building a sports field is a preferred option. Personally speaking, I harbor the idea that the authority is supposed to construct a public garden and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To start with, building a public garden is conducive to the residents living around. Due to the plants’ photosynthesis effect, the plants in a public garden are capable of generating fresh air, especially reproducing prolific oxygen. Nowadays, owing to the extensive construction both in rural and urban areas, there is an increasing number of toxic substance emitted to our environment and all of these poisonous materials exert a detrimental influence on our health. Meanwhile, with the ever-rising emission of exhaust fumes and the intensified haze caused by the proliferation of private cars, our respiratory systems have suffered a lot. Under such circumstance, it is self-explanatory that constructing a public garden enables the city to purify the air and prevents individuals from being enslaved by fatal respiratory diseases. In addition, the garden can be also utilized as a place to do exercises, like playing badminton, performing square dances and so on. Benefiting from the exercises, the citizens living adjacent to the park apparently can possess robust bodies through the regular exercises. Hence, building a public garden contribute to reinforce the citizens’ health through the air purification and reinforce citizens’ health.
What’s more, a public garden also plays a vital role in addressing individuals’ mental problems. Living in a society full of fierce competition, there is a bunch of citizens suffering from the great pressure from different aspects, like families, jobs or studies. In contrast, society fails to tackle the issue, which gives rise to some serious social problems, like a school shooting, kidnapping or other crimes committed in different approaches. Therefore it is time for the regime to allocate enough fund to build a comfortable place for individuals to relieve their strain. Obviously, a public park is a leading choice. In this park, individuals are entitled to sitting on the benches to enjoy the charming scenery surrounding with them and rejuvenate themselves through drowning themselves in amazing natural miracles. Apart from that, the public park also affords individuals with a suitable place to talk with their friends or parents, during the talk, they are likely to gain a lot of life guidance, which potentially enables them to solve problems confronted with them and eradicates their mood swing.
Admittedly, building a sports field for students in high school has its perks, but with regard to the serious issues faced with the whole society, we have to admit that the public garden can exert an active influence on all citizens, including the students in high school. Therefore, the merits of erecting a sports field for high school students are outshone by the benefits of the construction of a public garden.
In a nutshell, erecting a garden for the whole citizens is the optimal option for the authority to invest on since it can not only build up the citizens’ strengths and tackle their mental problems but also enlarge the aspects of individuals who can benefit from this investment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in contrast, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3046.0 1977.66487455 154% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3816254417 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07892696118 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 947.7 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1747266917 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.047619048 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9523809524 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0489473402538 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138710028093 0.076458572812 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266219736596 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0319492780962 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233433824044 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 86.8835125448 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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