Government has done enough to educate people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating habits
Nowadays, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, thus the authority is paying more attention to the living qualities of citizens, including healthy lifestyles. Some individuals reckon that the government fails to bear its responsibility on raising the public’s awareness of living healthy lives, however, I can hardly concur with this opinion and what I state can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, the government has distributed lots of funds to building multiple infrastructures, like gyms, sports fields or other facilities used for building physical fitness. Under the circumstance of fast-paced lives, there is an increasing number of people suffering from mounting pressure generated from excessive workload or school assignments, thus the time can be devoted to doing exercise is diminished in a large extent. However, with these facilities erected by the funds allocated from the government, citizens are enabled to take the advantage of those facilities adjacent to their communities to do more exercises, through which they can possess robust bodies and lay a solid foundation for challenges emerging in their future career paths. For instance, my father, as an eminent architect, is usually occupied with his works, like drawing drafts or erecting models for construction, which does exert detrimental effects on his health. However, with the facilities constructed in our community, my father is capable of going to the gym during his limited spare time, hence, he can get rid of the workload for a while and build up his strengths through accelerating blood circulation and stretching out his arms and legs. This example reveals that the government’s endeavor in building infrastructures to stimulate city dwellers to lead healthy lives has obtained great attainment.
What’s more, the regime also devotes time and energy to awake individuals’ consciousness of healthy lifestyles. Initially, some local governments post a bunch of advertisement in public transits, like bus stations or railway platforms, to propagate the deficiencies of unhealthy habits, such as takeaway food or cigarettes. Meanwhile, in order to engage individuals’ interests in these advertisements, these local governments even pour a large number of funds to design advertisements, involving more novel factors or components related with youngsters’ prevailing trend. Apart from that, the government also launches some other activities to remind city dwellers the significance of healthy lifestyles. For instance, in my university, every month, there are some officers from varieties of departments coming to our school to have a surveillance on our dining hall to ensure that students’ diets are healthy enough without excessive chemical additives. At the same time, they also call upon all students to purchase food based on the comprehensive consideration of the nutrients we ought to take to maintain our bodies’ well-being. Therefore, the government has also spared no efforts to reinforce individuals’ awareness of leading healthy lives with the mentioned above activities.
Admittedly, there are still some firm measures that the authority can take to further encourage city dwellers to improve their healthy habits, nevertheless, there is no denying that the government’s recent commitment in fostering individuals’ healthy habits has made indelible achievements, which should not be ignored.
In a nutshell, the government has taken sufficient measures to educate citizens about the importance of healthy lifestyles through their commitment to building infrastructures and awaking individuals’ consciousness of healthy habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3186.0 1615.20841683 197% => OK
No of words: 546.0 315.596192385 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83516483516 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45096744317 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562271062271 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 989.1 506.74238477 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5803664742 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.411764706 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1176470588 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150963024635 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531170366639 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551093406029 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108354978499 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663612080572 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 78.4519038076 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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