There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about maintenance of changing rooms in your sports center.
Rooms do not have proper hangers and water facilities. Moreover, flooring is rudimentary as well as slippery. Additionally,
paint on the walls is in poor condition while there are no proper locks inside it which impacts the security.
It was disheartening for the player to have such experience. I was scared that I would have injured myself on the floor. Furthermore, contemporery condition is not exemplery and is impacting negatively preparation of the players. Everyone is expecting good services in order to prepare themselves vehemently for the match.
I hereby, request you to inspect all the change rooms thoroughly and deploy the engineer to revamp it. Especially, water facilities should be addressed first and foremost. Likewise, a supervisor can be employed for every block to monitor routine breakdown.
I am hoping to receive a positive response.
Yours Sincerely
Navdeep Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... contemporery condition is not exemplery and is impacting negatively preparation ...
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Line 16, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse. Yours Sincerely Navdeep Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5125 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10352622029 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6948982529 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8461538462 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158692937365 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428564243601 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617295241431 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686644149238 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716926319858 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 7.45979381443 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.79 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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