You play sport.(e.g.football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in hospital.
Write a letter to your team mate. In your letter.
Say how to you feel about the news.
Ask about the treatment in the hospital.
Suggest some ways of cheering him/her up.
Dear Jack,
I'm writing this letter about your health condition.Recently, I received a message from our soccer coach Mr.Mechangi , you got Knee injured during practice session before practice main National games in London. I would really felt sad heard that news. Actually I was in vacation came to hometown some personal problems in my family.
I think you joined near St.Mary Hospital which locates near to practice session ground. I think ask doctors need to check is there any major injury, need to X-ray and scanning which is possible to diagnose exactly whether it is smaller or critical. Also, discuss with neurology specialist doctor. In addition to that try to practice better recovery physiotherapy treatment. It might be better recover you soon.
I would say don't worry about incident it's unfortunate , be strong every sports person taken challenges to injuries it's quiet common. As sports need to take challenges in terms of either professionally and personally. I would be available in couple of weeks in London will meet you. I would wish you better recovery soon with strongly and full of energy as you stronger than earlier.
I would appreciate to our soccer team coach and team members will always support to you in terms of all activities.If need any type of help don't hesitate ask me any time I'll support. I wish you better recover soon. Take care about your health.
Yours faithfully,
Thomas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Recently
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... family. I think you joined near St.Mary Hospital which locates near to practice...
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...etter recover you soon. I would say dont worry about incident its unfortunate , ...
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...ont worry about incident its unfortunate , be strong every sports person taken cha...
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...nergy as you stronger than earlier. I would appreciate to our soccer team coa...
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...pport to you in terms of all activities.If need any type of help dont hesitate ask...
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...pport to you in terms of all activities.If need any type of help dont hesitate ask...
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...all activities.If need any type of help dont hesitate ask me any time Ill support. I...
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...e of help dont hesitate ask me any time Ill support. I wish you better recover soon...
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...about your health. Yours faithfully, Thomas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07234042553 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72513742379 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3680210897 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254263763386 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751328498096 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497490157365 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14094063572 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539111573296 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.