What are the effects of doing sport on the human’s overall health and lifetime?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Recently, the phenomenon of affection for doing sports on human health and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that adventure sports are highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that doing sport can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From sportsmen standpoint, sports clubs can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that amateur sportsmen, as well as professional sportsmen, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the effectiveness of sport on health. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both team and individual sports apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of sports medicines, sports injuries might increase the consequences of sports damages. Moreover, fundamental aspects of being a sports athlete relate to this reality that the demerits of dangerous sports pertain to sports injuries. As a tangible example, a scientific research was undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of soccer sport is correlated negatively with sports damages. Hence it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of sports stadiums.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the doing regular sport far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of modern sports like rugby prove the significance of its effect on human health, but also pinpoint improving lifetime implications.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...oreover, fundamental aspects of being a sports athlete relate to this reality that the...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...demerits of dangerous sports pertain to sports injuries. As a tangible example, a scie...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...related negatively with sports damages. Hence it is correct to presume the preconceiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74045801527 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6116713472 2.71678728327 133% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5294817249 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356693832013 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124090410159 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778462751403 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206874336001 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531695933129 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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