What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
As my country has a rich history, there were many historical events that my nation witnessed. In my opinion, the establishment of Azerbaijan Democratic Republic had the most significant effect on our state. That is due to the fact that we became sovereign after 100 years of Russian imperialism.
First of all, immediately after our country became independent, we began to integrate into international society. Consequently we started to thrive in many aspects like economy, education, medicine. Although the lifespan of our country was short, we managed to make some momentous steps. For instance, our government granted women equal political rights with men, established the first modern-type university of Azerbaijan, gained official recognition, established diplomatic relations with a number of states, prepared a Constitution, designed and adopted our flag, made Azerbaijani the official language of our country. These actions made our country the first democratic republic in the Turkic and Muslim world and contributed to our second independence in the twentieth century.
Secondly, this made the defense of our nation easier, because our government made remarkable progress in the military. In my opinion that was one of the most essential act that should be done, since there were massacres of about 12,000 Azerbaijanis and other Muslim. As a result, we had our own army and this army was able to win the Battle of Baku. It played an important role in defending the western boarders.
Finally, it helped our nation to experience the feeling of freedom. I consider that liberty should be the most valuable thing for any nation, because there are too many nations, however, 195 of them have a country. Muhammad Amin Rasulzadeh, the national leader of Azerbaijan, also regarded the freedom as the main thing they provided people with.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that this event affected my country deeply. That is because we became autonomous after a long time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152866242 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91480619875 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3206908828 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1764705882 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108876213652 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406901978252 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573223889254 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722605654762 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593222993228 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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