technology has made the world a better place to live do you agree or not ( argumentative essay )

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Technology
technology has brought to humans life radical chan...
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...brought to humans life radical changes. some people believe these changes have a pos...
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Suggestion: While
... have a positive effect on their lives. while others believe technology has a negativ...
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Suggestion: .
... comfortable life especially in the home . recently you can not have a kitchen wit...
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Suggestion: Recently
...mfortable life especially in the home . recently you can not have a kitchen without any ...
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... the most important device in these days . to sum up, today no one lives without t...
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...e most important device in these days . to sum up, today no one lives without tech...
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... today no one lives without technology. it makes our life easier and more comforta...
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...ur life easier and more comfortable. second, technology has facilitated communicati...
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...cilitated communication around the world . in the past, people used simple ways t...
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...tated communication around the world . in the past, people used simple ways to co...
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Suggestion:
...g each other through your phone screen. In other hands, some people disagree wit...
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Suggestion: Because
... made the world a better place to live. because the advance of technology makes the man...
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Suggestion: .
...ental process like in calculating things .in addition, there are no more jobs avai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85277777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74171261485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1431358566 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432626801728 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161340915234 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185231799533 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287660743681 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166156967599 0.056905535591 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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