You are going to visit New Zealand for an ‘English and Homestay’ program.
You have just received details of your homestay host family.
Write your first letter to the family. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask the family some questions to get information that is
important to you
tell the family about your arrival date and time
Dear Sara,
Thanks for being my host this summer for four weeks, I have just received the details on an email from program manager that I will be staying with you, so I wanted to give you heads up. My name is Mike and I am currently working in India as english instructor for a private institution and i will be visiting New Zealand for an english and homestay program.
Since this is the first time I am visting Newzealand, i wanted to ask you if you pass me directions on how to arrive at your house in Wellington from airport.Similarly, if you could also help arrange a local cab which could help to pick and drop me from your house to the 35 caring avenue as the program is scheduled at this location.I would be arriving on 25th June around 11 pm flight number XJ1234 Qantas Airlines from Delhi-Singapore-Wellington, there will be a short halt in Singapore.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully
vinshu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-14 | navjot jammu | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, Thanks for being my host this summer for...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nstructor for a private institution and i will be visiting New Zealand for an eng...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd for an english and homestay program. Since this is the first time I am vistin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the first time I am visting Newzealand, i wanted to ask you if you pass me direct...
^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...t your house in Wellington from airport.Similarly, if you could also help arrange a local...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e program is scheduled at this location.I would be arriving on 25th June around 1...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, similarly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10136755732 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.441087624 44.8134815571 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.0 76.5299724578 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.6 16.8248392259 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257861537465 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1389276086 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432090592429 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143029186215 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724875177389 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.