Fast food has become a part of our society . what is the impact of fast food on human health?
The substantial influence of the change in eating habits in our society has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend over the years. With the increase in westernization , people tend to follow the western culture than their own culture. The media and technology has literally changed the definition of lifestyles of every individual, so I strongly agree that fast food has been adopted by the society .
To begin with, the children are more fond of junk food rather than homemade, unprocessed food. Also , the packed food is easily available and cheaper so the intake has really shooed since recent years. The movies and social media has set an image of western culture and every body has followed it including the eating patterns. Moreover, the busy lifestyle leaves no time to cook so the fast food which is ready to make remains the best opted thing.
Another key justification for upholding the notions is that taste buds are addicted to fast food rather than cooked food items. The results are obesity in young children, also the problems of stomach abnormalities like diarrhea, dysentery and food poisoning. Moreover, these problems cause disturbance in daily work schedule so therefore, increase in stress level for both children and adults. For an instance , the irregular classes or office always cause work tendency.
Conclusively , health is wealth and everything comes after that. Hence health should be the first preference and in order to lead a healthy life , all the healthy habits should be adopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, likewise, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20848056537 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91286554374 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3183354836 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164589238159 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522915589306 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969061679317 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102365689255 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977130874483 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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