Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The subjects taught in the school give essential knowledge of human life from social rules to physic and chemical theories. Some laud that the most vital subject is history while others believe subjects like science and technology are more crucial in order to live in modern world. On my perspective, both aspects are equally important at some reasons.
In one hand, history tells about stories which teach about mistakes and solutions of quagmires that were occurred in the past, as well as milestone of human life. Our youngster should know about our ancestors' history in order to avoid same mistakes and prevent possible dangerous consequences before it becomes wide. For instance, detrimental of World war one and two had been clearly written in the history. By teaching this historical event, people acknowledge that war brings grievous and become black spot in human timeline.
In other hand, people believe science and technology subjects are essential than history. Nowadays it is difficult to imagine that world without sciences and technologies hence i would be like in stone age. Subjects like science and technology lessons teach students about chemistry, physics and computer technology in order to be in line with modern world and to create future with enormous innovation. It is like something is not available now, possible in the future with help of technology and science. For instance, with help of computer, we able to communicate each other far faster than before through internet application such as facebook, skype etc.
In conclusion, those history, science and technology subjects are equally essential to pursue better future without past mistakes.
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...application such as facebook, skype etc. In conclusion, those history, science an...
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Message: Did you mean 'this history' or 'those histories'?
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...facebook, skype etc. In conclusion, those history, science and technology subjects are eq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33834586466 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61450962515 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.919675392 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292807965241 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103106156066 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788399081019 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165184855116 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812892879855 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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