Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, many people think that parents should teach how to be good members of society. Other opinions believe that school is the best place to learn this. I think that is good and wrong statements.
The parents have a role to lead their kids to become a good person who useful with the society. For example, the parents teach about respect and helpful for their son and daughter. The children will apply it in the society, like help their friends to solve the problem or respect the old people to across the main street. Since young, the parents have to teach their children and give more attention to manage them. But, that is not just parents responsible to teach the kids, the teacher have a role to teach the kids how to be a good member in society.
In the school, the kids will apply the knowledge about social in their small environment. The school is the right place for students to manage their social responsibilities and become the right model for their friends. For example, in the school, there is a team that the kids have to work with other students. They have to be a good team work in the school. The teacher give a more attention to the students, so the kids can improve their social abilities and apply it in the right place.
In a nutshell, home and school is the best place for children to increasing their social abilities so the parents and the children have the same role to educate the kids become good members of society.
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Sentence: The parents have a role to lead their kids to become a good person who useful with the society.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and useful
Sentence: The teacher give a more attention to the students, so the kids can improve their social abilities and apply it in the right place.
Description: The fragment teacher give a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
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