People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
people usually think that most decisions which they made always follow the surrounding situations but not society, whereas I believe that surrounding situations and society both have some influence on people's attitudes. I will explore the reasons in the following essay.
we certainly cannot underestimate the effect of some individuals and the close surroundings to the formation of personal values. For example, when a CEO of the business company want to take a decision, his attitude must be affected by the ecosystem of the markets, and the benefit which the company will get as he determined a decision. On the other words, the markets and the benefit represent the surroundings and the immediate situation, respectively. Thus, people are easy to be affected by the influence by the surroundings and sometimes have to accept it.
On the other hand, people are after all products of their environment. Any character or personality is, if traced down to its original, simply a projection against the backdrop of the society. There is no objection that child grows up under the effect of his family, friends, and teachers, and all these people are also products of the society. such a situation could link to the animal in wild fields. usually, animals seem to live by the ecological system of the island such as a simple food chain or living in a limited area. However, the island ecosystem is the component of the bigger ecosystem. As a result, although the growth of many animals looks like developing in the small groups or area, they actually are shaped by the whole environment in secret.
In fact, we can see that people's attitude and behavior are in a process of continual changes. In people's childhood, they learn from his relatively small world, and when they grow up, they start to contact the entire world and learn from the whole world. Therefore, we are difficult to say that most of our attitude are determined by surroundings. The true is the society already assimilate into everywhere, but sometimes we do not know about it.
In summary, while we think surroundings determine people's mind and behaviors, surroundings are the part of the world. I am of the opinion that people are all influenced by society fundamentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, after all, for example, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98933333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85726084836 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4510177427 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4736842105 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28029204602 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737109995523 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618915743161 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156525607375 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522391222371 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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