Nowadays the level of violence is increasing in video games and some TV programs. What are the reasons behind this? What can be the the effects and solutions?
It is an unfortunate truth that these days violence and brutality is quite evident and purposely shown on media or through video games. There is a complete organization behind this, who controls the viewing materials. It has been widely affecting the viewers, especially our young generation. With the technological advancements, the access of all sorts of violent content and game is made so easy. Despite of several parenting controls in placed; there are enormous loop holes through which these materials can be accessed.
Predominantly, the main factor to show brutality is to urge masses to replicate the same behavior in their practical lives. This the part of war strategies of many countries to exploit the generation in such a way that people become rebellious and stop acting like law-abiding citizens (mind-set shift).
There are innumerable negative impacts this phenomenon can make over people. Media plays with mindsets through these channels and influence them to behave the same way in their personal lives. For instance, theft of robbary is depicted as easiest way of making money; people with less rational mindset percieves is as a best idea to copy. No wonder crime rate is increasing in every part of the world.
There are numerous strategic actions that needs to be taken in this regard. Government and social responsible agencies can play a vital role in this perspective. Stringent controls should be in placed over the material shown in video games and TV shows. The censor board authorities should be empowered enough to ban violent content.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, i opine that violent materials can be very detrimental. This does not leads to the discouragement of using latest technologies like 3D, 5D or VR, but the content needs to be strictly monitored as it may cause severe negative impacts or portrays the bad image of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85656995074 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4552876454 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169415037768 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512772443196 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397733204709 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860424238728 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527176301104 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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