Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Many people wonder about which is better either staying in small town or in a big city. Indisputably, small town is less crowded, hence it has peaceful environment and one can enjoy beauty of nature fully. Nevertheless, the big town consists of varieties of opportunities and facilities that make our life easier and happier. Different people may have different positions on this topic, however, in my perspective staying in town will benefits an individual from different aspects. In this essay I am going to write why I find big town is better to live with some cogent reasons and examples.
First of all, big town provides us various opportunities so as to develop ourselves as a civilized human. Since, big town are well equipped with various trades, businesses, companies and universities. A person gets an opportunity to develop himself as a person. One can find job easily and can use money in the area of his interest as everything is available easily in big town. For instance, I used stay in a semi urban area during my college days, it was very difficult for me to find a job at that time. Likewise, I was paid very few wages for my job even if I get the one. Currently, I am staying in a big town. Now, I have sound job and my company pays me international standard salary. Hence, big town is always best to provide opportunities according to one’s potential.
Second, big town has all kinds of facilities available to make our lives easier. Big town provides all the basic infrastructures like health, education, drinking water, electricity, communication as well as it comprises very advance facilities. People don’t need to die due to lack of advance health facilities and one don’t need to be limited so choose the area of their interest in the field of education. Big cities consists different universities, colleges which allow a student to choose best among all so as to do specialization. Likewise, a person can get all the facilities to make his/her life happier and prosperous. As a paradigm, when my uncle had heart attack last year at our home town he had to choose death due to lack of advance equipment in hospital if he was in a big town with better health facilities he might be with us today. Hence, big town has not only made our life easier it has actually made our life longer.
In conclusion, although small town has peaceful environment and has less crowd, while talking about the opportunities and facilities, big town is always ahead of small town. So, I think living in big town will facilitate a person from every aspect, one can get all the facilities which makes our life advance with all the existing facilities in the world. Hence, I prefer living in town rather in small town or village.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... in my perspective staying in town will benefits an individual from different aspects. I...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... town provides us various opportunities so as to develop ourselves as a civilized human....
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...llow a student to choose best among all so as to do specialization. Likewise, a person c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, talking about, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76778242678 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.848442177 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470711297071 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9369616294 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9583333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29166666667 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208264500651 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071008565296 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768021985476 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152706203128 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729443732236 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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