You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to highlight some issues with the current accommodation I am sharing with another student in the Youth hostel. I have recently joined the hostel and was allocated room no 1078 in the New building complex. I would like to bring to your notice some problems which I am facing
Firstly the room space is very small, and there are no shelves to keep your belongings additionally there is no table and chair in the room thus it is difficult to study in the room. The room does not have proper ventilation thus it is very difficult to stay inside as if there is a lot of suffocation. Secondly, there is a lot of noise coming from the adjacent rooms which makes it difficult to study.
So in the above context, I would ask you to arrange a separate accommodation for myself which will be able to discuss the above issues.
I look forward to your immediate response and resolution on the same.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r notice some problems which I am facing Firstly the room space is very small, an...
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Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'separate accommodation'.
Suggestion: separate accommodation
...ove context, I would ask you to arrange a separate accommodation for myself which will be able to discus...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esolution on the same. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58620689655 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59691270712 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5231305425 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2223732597 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725271198624 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688836694132 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100912836458 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667028557784 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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